Feedback and Risk Assessments for "Pirate vs Pirate"

Today I had a surgery with a lecturer who gave some positive feedback on my script saying that it works well and gets the needed information across. However, he said I should switch the last two phrases in the script. Instead of "Shiver me timbers! Not ye treasure!" it is now "Not ye treasure! Shiver me timbers!" Another piece of advice was to have a link to a website where the audience can go to find out more information.

Also today, I got the Risk Assessment to film in the University's TV studio completed and signed: